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Nominator: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 23:24, 2 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 21:21, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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  • Ruskaretki ... In Japan ... momijigari (hunting autumn leaves).[1][2] In South Korea, leaf peeping is known as dan pung ku gyeong and in China it is known as shangye. - you've helpfully explained the Japanese term, but not the other three. They'd benefit from a similar gloss, with an explanation of any ambiguities and associations of the terms (like peeping, ahem); Chinese words similarly very often have multiple meanings and connotations.
  • embedded deep within Japanese culture - I'd imagine that it has a similar place to the Japanese cherry blossom celebrations, Sakura. Has nobody written about the relationship of these two?
    • From RS that I've looked into, no.
  • 8,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 (or near offer). Maybe just say "8 bn" to avoid string of digits and commas?
  • Stourhead ... in the London area - well, as a Brit I love this. I know ours is a "Small Island", but Stourhead is a 2-hour drive from the West of London (on a good day), more from the centre, and that seems quite far to us little islanders... and it's more than halfway across the small island, too.
    • All  Done.
  • I've done a small amount of minor copyediting.
    • Thanks.

Images

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  • Two images seems rather few in relation to the number of places mentioned. Perhaps an image of the Forest of Dean would be a useful addition as the 'Other countries' section is unillustrated.
    •  Done
  • All three images including the 'new' one are plausibly licensed on Commons.

Sources

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  • Per MOS, 'Footnotes' should precede all the biblio/source material.
    •  Done
  • Spot-checks: [2], [3], [12], [13], [30] ok.

Summary

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The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.